Friday, October 23, 2020

My Life in Lock down

 

2 comments:

  1. Hey Ashley
    This is a good piece of writing.
    When we were in lock it was really boring.
    I like how you did a colourful background.
    From Mylee.

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  2. Hey Ashley
    This piece of writing is amazing.
    When I was in lock down I Found it really boring to.
    I look how you have made a post about your lock down.
    I think your Nana would be so happy to you.
    I like how you have used capital letter and full stops.
    I also like how you have really described your lock down.
    Your sincerely Nia

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